the next work involved the hands which were modeled with the usual "flesh" colors along with the arm, all painted with the #16 round cosmotop. i then decided to further add and darken the shadows on his shirt. this was accomplished with cerulean blue, alizarin crimson permanent, and raw sienna. i usually made this up into a neutral gray (incompletely mixed) on the palette and then charged in one or two of the colors after the basic shape is laid down. this last for interest and to break up the monotone. i played around a little more with the pattern on his shirt and i like the way it darkens the value around his face and hands and gives some texture. how far down i will carry it remains to be seen, but i doubt it will from shoulders to the tail. at this point i am going quite slowly as this is where i can make some rash decisions and the painting could start going south. the whole thing is just a bit insipid at this point but some color in the background and darks in the shirt will help bring it together. i am going to put a "string" of small darks up from the bottom near the midline in the form of some dark buttons (such as the one just below his *left* hand) and the crevices on his watchband.
after this was done i took a look at the painting from about 25 feet away and decided that his hair was too dark and made him look younger than he really was. to try to mitigate this i lifted off some lighter strands here and there using a thirsty flat, 3/4", flat synthetic brush. this is the only change from the above photo and the final one. i may have gotten too carried away but, again, i will take stock nearer the end and see how values align then. not to panic; all is fixable at this point and i don't think any fatal mistakes have been made.
the background is lagging a little far behind the figure so next time i will start to bring it back up to "speed." cheers for now.
Hi Bob, I regret that I have not been able to follow along as closely as I had hoped due to being in school vacation mode, with my three teenage grandchildren staying with me through the week. When I surprised them with your step-by-step painting to this second stage, they were very impressed, and all said, what a 'great likeness' you had achieved. Although they had met John, albeit briefly, they were 'more familiar' with the photo. So, their approval is definitely 'another three notches on your favourite watercolour brush'!
ReplyDeleteThe wash of burnt umber over the irises is perfect; it re-kindles an instant! Thank you, Bob, and most certainly, the ultramarine blue lightly glazed over his features is a priceless tip, well-worth noting for the future.
I particularly like the way you've described John's right hand, resting in tiredness, on the crook of his time-worn, trusty cane and the way you've cropped the composition so that his elbow, arm and cane make a fine, resting triangle for the obvious frailty-of-age.
I feel enormously honoured by your decision to use my photo. Thank you again, Bob.
i am glad that you like the end result, barbara. this was my first foray into painting someone else's photo and i was a bit nervous that i could do it justice. through your comments and my study i almost feel like i know john and will not soon forget the experience. thanks for the photo.
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